You have observed al;l 3 continuity editing techniques - there is a MOA of the door, a very brief SRS sequence, and you don't break the 180. You have used costume and an good location as well. Good eyeline match of the wrists a swell.
Some things to consider. 1. White balance - the graininess of your shots would suggest that you did not always set the WB. Remember set each time you are changing direction of camera. 2. SRS - you needed more reverse shots of Claire's character. You could have shot from behind Kayla. Your LS and ELS. Clair is far too low in the frame - you needed to lower your tripod and think about the positioning of the body with in the frame. On a number of occasions, her feet fall out of the frame.
As I am now supervising your group can you post all thriller research posts including Usual Suspects and Dragon Tatoo and please make sure that you have your names on the post. You have missed the deadline so you need to get everything posted as soon as possible. Any problem see me
You have observed al;l 3 continuity editing techniques - there is a MOA of the door, a very brief SRS sequence, and you don't break the 180. You have used costume and an good location as well. Good eyeline match of the wrists a swell.
ReplyDeleteSome things to consider.
1. White balance - the graininess of your shots would suggest that you did not always set the WB. Remember set each time you are changing direction of camera.
2. SRS - you needed more reverse shots of Claire's character. You could have shot from behind Kayla.
Your LS and ELS. Clair is far too low in the frame - you needed to lower your tripod and think about the positioning of the body with in the frame. On a number of occasions, her feet fall out of the frame.
Pass - well done.
As I am now supervising your group can you post all thriller research posts including Usual Suspects and Dragon Tatoo and please make sure that you have your names on the post. You have missed the deadline so you need to get everything posted as soon as possible. Any problem see me
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